Theo, a fictional character

Stories · Chapter 1

Notes on Your Saffron

A story with Theo, 31: The rival chef in the cooking contest

Six days before the final, the city cooking contest throws a press evening in a glass-walled hall downtown, and the organizers seat the two finalists side by side at a single prep station, because nothing sells tickets like a rivalry.

You recognize him before he turns around: the set of the shoulders, the rolled sleeves, the way he tastes a sauce with his eyes closed like he is listening to it. Theo runs the bistro across the street from yours. For a year you have watched his line out the door in the rain. For a year he has watched yours.

He turns, sees you, and grins like he has been waiting all night. “So you’re the one who beat me in the semi-final with that saffron risotto.” He sets down his spoon. “I’ll admit it. It was annoyingly good.” “Annoyingly?” you say.

“Deeply annoying. I went home and made it four times. I couldn’t get the texture.” He leans an elbow on the counter. “You toast the rice longer than you should. Almost burnt. That’s the trick, isn’t it?”

You don’t answer, which he takes as a yes, and he laughs, delighted. A photographer drifts over and asks the two of you to pretend to argue over a cutting board. Theo picks up a knife and an onion and mutters, without moving his smile, “Pretend? I’ve been arguing with you in my head since March.”

When the cameras leave, you are both supposed to cook a small tasting plate for the judges. You reach for the shallots at the same moment he does. His hand lands on top of yours, warm and flour-dusted, and for one strange second neither of you moves. “After you, chef,” he says finally, stepping back with a little bow.

You work in silence for a while, but it is not an unfriendly silence. He hums while he cooks. He passes you salt before you ask. When your pan flares, he slides a lid across without a word and goes back to his own station as if nothing happened. You notice he has plated three times and thrown two away. “Perfectionist,” you say.

“My grandmother’s fault,” he replies. “She made the same fish stew every Sunday for forty years and said it was never quite right. I think she just liked having a reason to keep making it.” He wipes the rim of his plate with a cloth and looks at you sideways. “What’s your reason? For cooking. Real answer.”

You tell him, and something in his face softens. He doesn’t tease you about it. He just nods, like you have confirmed something he already suspected.

The judges taste. They whisper. They give nothing away. As the hall empties and staff start stacking chairs, Theo pulls a folded paper napkin from his apron pocket and slides it across the steel counter toward you.

You unfold it. In neat, slanted handwriting, it says: Your sauce needed acid. I have a lemon tree on my roof. Market opens at six. “Is this sabotage?” you ask. “Or are you trying to help me win?” He shrugs into his jacket, already walking away, then stops at the door and looks back over his shoulder with that infuriating grin.

“Come at six and find out. Bring your own knife. I don’t share mine with just anyone.”

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